The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
The pie charts
provides
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information with data about the outcomes of a survey inti the popularity
about
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leisure
activities
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of European adults in two different periods (1985 and 1995).
Overall
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, it is evident from the charts that adults spent more time
in
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watching TV in both years shown.
To begin
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with a detailed analysis, the highest percentage of leisure
activities
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that gentlemen did
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was watching TV , which accounted for slightly under a third of the total. Followed by, talking to friends and family was 39 per cent. Just under a quarter
adults
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was
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went out for eating and
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6% for other
activities
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.
On the other hand
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, in 1995, European
grown-up
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did more exercise than before. To illustrate,young was played computer games
at
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slightly more than a quarter.
According to
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watching television remained steady at 30%. Talking with family and friends went down by a
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6% ,and eating out had
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opposite trend which declined to 8%.
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,
adult
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adults
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didn't interstate to other
activities
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, which
also
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decreased by 4%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steadily rise/drop
  • surge in popularity
  • decline/fall in interest
  • relative popularity
  • emerging trends
  • technological advancements
  • social changes
  • shift in preferences
  • popularity surge
  • dominant activity
  • market demand
  • consumer behavior
  • leisure industry
  • outdoor/indoor activities
  • decade comparison
  • survey results
  • preference shift
  • entertainment sector
  • sports and recreation
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