The chart above shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart above shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The bar chart provides information about the salaries of five different careers in the UK, and the table provides the average weekly work
hours
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of each job.
Overall
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, all five professions have salaries slightly increased after three years, compared to starting wages. The nurse is the
lowest paid
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job,
while
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the underground driver is the highest. For working time, teachers and firefighters have the most working time per week, with the underground driver working the least
hours
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.
According to
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the chart, there is
a
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minimal growth in wages for all professions after three years. The nurse started at around 15,000 pounds, which is the lowest-paid job,
then
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rose to almost 20,000 pounds. The police, teachers, firefighters, and underground drivers have salaries with an estimated 10,000 pounds difference incrementally, with the police having the lowest pay raise. In terms of working
hours
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, the underground driver requires the least amount of time, with 36
hours
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per week,
although
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receives the highest salary. Meanwhile, the teacher and the firefighter have the longest
workhour
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at 55
hours
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per week.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • salary levels
  • disparities
  • correlation
  • average working hours
  • job satisfaction
  • work-life balance
  • earning potential
  • personal time
  • economic impact
  • social impact
  • job demand
  • skill levels
  • broad economy
  • profession
  • community contribution
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