The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key information about
passengers
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accidents and
injuries
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in 2002. The units are measured
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per 100 million passenger miles travelled.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that demand response had the highest rate of
incidents
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225 per 100 million.
In addition
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, demand response accounted
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highest figures in
injuries
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,
whereas
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buses
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injuries
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had a lower rate for 66 PMT.
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what it
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, commuter roil recorded
as
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the lowest
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as well as
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injuries
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it had a slight difference between
incidents
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and
injuries
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for 20 and 17 PMT
also
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heavy roil accounted for 51 and 35 PMT, respectively.
In terms
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of
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, light rail and
bus
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the bus
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had the same rates in
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for 76 number per 100 million. Commuter
roil
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compared to
demond
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demand
response they had the highest and lowest numbers in both categories respectively.
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, buses had the nearest numbers in them.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words injuries, incidents with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Passenger Miles Travelled (PMT)
  • incidents per 100 million PMT
  • injuries per 100 million PMT
  • transportation type
  • comparative measures
  • statistical analysis
  • proportionate level
  • anomalous data
  • discrepancies in safety figures
  • severity of incidents
  • frequency of occurrences
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