The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides key information about the cycle of recycling
plastic
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bottles process starts and ends.  
Overall
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, it is clear from the process that
the first
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step
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is throwing the
plastic
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bottle in the garbage, and
then
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they are taken by the truck , to deliver it to the recycling centre and workers start to divide them.
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, at the 5th
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, they shape the bottles in blocks to crush them easily by the machine,
also
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washing them with a liquid is part of the 5th
step
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.
According to
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what is shown, in the 6th
step
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, they start to produce it into
plastic
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pellets by other machine and start heating them with a hot source to shape them easily
to
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into
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raw materials
,
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apply
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and start to sort them into containers, the
last
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stage is manufacturing them to many types of products,
such
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as pencils and new bottles, lunch boxes
as well as
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plastic
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bags.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • collection
  • recycling centers
  • transported
  • recycling plant
  • sorted
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • shredded
  • flakes
  • melted
  • pellets
  • raw material
  • manufacturing
  • containers
  • clothing
  • recycling loop
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