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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about the categorization of foreign
students
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 that study in
Canada
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 and America by nation of origin in two different
years
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, 2002, and 2003 and their
percentage
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 changes.
Overall
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, it is seen that the USA had the highest number of international
students
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 in both
years
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 with lower
percentage
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 changes,
whereas
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, the number of foreign
students
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 studying in
Canada
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 in 2002 and 2003 was lower with higher proportion changes. In
Canada
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, the majority of
students
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 abroad originated from China,
while
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, in America, many non-local
students
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 came from India. In the United States of America, most of the
students
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 from overseas were from India with a total of 382,000 people with a
percentage
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 change of -9% in both
years
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.
In addition
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, Chinese
students
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 studying in
Canada
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 ranked 2nd place as there were a total of 226,000
students
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 with a +6% increase from 2002 to 2003.
However
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, Canadian
students
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 were just 64,370 in number with a +7% during the given time period. In
Canada
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, Chinese
students
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 were the majority with a
percentage
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 increase of +45% from 5,400 to 7,850 in 2002 and 2003 respectively.
Furthermore
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, the population of
students
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 from The States were 5,000 to 5,450 which was a +9% in the span of two
years
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.
Students
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 from India were the least in the population having 2,100
students
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 in 2002 and 2,835 in 2003 with a 35% increase in the given period of time.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, canada, years, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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