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Research is an essential part of completing assignments. Write a report for a course tutor suggesting some good places to obtain useful information. Give reasons for your choices.

Doing assignments involves different phases, like researching from various sources, writing the main key points, taking feedback from others, and many more. Research plays a crucial role in the assignment because it helps to understand the basic concept of the topic. In
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 essay, I will explain the superior places where people can gain knowledge and the reason behind choosing these platforms in the following paragraphs. Considering the sources for searching information. First and foremost, the
internet
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 is a very useful platform as a search engine. It not only helps multitudes to obtain knowledge, but it
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 provides several results for one topic so that individuals gain information as much as possible. The main reason is that everyone has
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access to the
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. It gives multiple responses on a single concept to know deeply about the subject. With the help of audio and visual effects,
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 makes things easier to understand. Another place is libraries. Schools have libraries where students can go, and search for
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 which are useful for their assignments because there are thousands of
books
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 available free of cost. They just need a library card to
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 access to it.
Books
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 are the first resource from where people start learning
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 and theories
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explain the topic deeply. That's the reason for choosing
books
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. In conclusion, to complete the assignment, research is essential.
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 there are many ways to gain knowledge,
books
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, and the
internet
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 play vital roles in research.

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Task Achievement
Make sure to provide specific examples or case studies to support your points in each section. This will strengthen your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve transitions between ideas to enhance the logical flow of your essay. Linking phrases can help guide the reader through your thoughts more clearly.
Task Achievement
Consider elaborating on your arguments more thoroughly. Providing more detail can make your conclusions more persuasive.
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The introduction is clear and establishes the purpose of the essay well, outlining the key areas that will be covered.
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The use of varied vocabulary, especially in the description of sources, is commendable.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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