The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
The pie chart illustrates data on the percentage of
carbohydrates
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, protein and fat in three types of diets.
Overall
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, Sports diets have a bigger portion of
carbohydrates
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than the other types,
while
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the percentage of fat is the smallest.
On the other hand
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, the average and healthy
diet
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have the same proportion of fat. Based on the data,
carbohydrates
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in a healthy
diet
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is four out of ten and it’s bigger than the average
diet
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portion. Yet, the proportion of protein in an average
diet
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is 10% higher than in a healthy
diet
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.
In addition
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, the average and healthy diets have the same percentage of fat, both have a fifth of fat.
Whereas
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,
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the sport
diet
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has the biggest portion of
carbohydrates
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, it has six out of ten. Meanwhile, the protein in the sports
diet
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is one-quarter and it’s become the lowest.
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, the fat proportion is lower than the average and healthy
diet
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, it’s only less than a fifth.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Vocabulary: Replace the words carbohydrates, diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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