The graph below shows the use of solar energy in four different countries from 1995 to 2015.

The Line chart below demonstrates the use of power from the sun in the USA, Germany, Japan and China.

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, the USA and China’s use of solar power experienced a significant increase over the time period. Japan’s use decreased gradually and Germany’s remained relatively stable The United States was the most country that consumed solar energy in 1995 approximately below 8,000 ,

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it showed a consistent increase every year to reach its peak at around 18,000 in 2015.

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, China was the lowest nation in solar energy usage at the start of the period. It had a gradual increase between 1995 and 2005 just slightly above 2000,

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It significantly climbed from 2005 to 2015 to reach below 12,000. Japan’s consumption of solar power started at 6,000 in 1995,

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decreased gradually throughout the time period to reach below 4,000 in 2015. For Germany, it relatively remained stable its consumption in 2015 was as same amount as in 1995, slightly above 2,000.

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The graph below shows the use of solar energy in four different countries from 1995 to 2015.

Nowadays number of older people select to live in retirement communities with other people rather than living with their adults .is it a positive or negative way.

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or mall to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much as from books, films, and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?