The diagram below shows how bricks are made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how bricks are made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how bricks are made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of brick manufacturing. The process involves nine steps starting from
clay
Use synonyms
extraction, and ending with the formation and delivery of bricks. The first stage involves the mining and preparation of
clay
Use synonyms
. Raw materials are extracted by using an excavator and transported to a storage pile. The
clay
Use synonyms
is
then
Linking Words
crushed into smaller sizes through cutting machines. After that, water is added to moisten the
clay
Use synonyms
, creating a workable mixture. The
last
Linking Words
stage is forming the
clay
Use synonyms
into brick, as the finished good. The semi-finished goods will be transferred into manufacturing machines to be formed and coated, in line with order specifications.
In addition
Linking Words
, the semi-finished goods will be coated and glazed before it is transferred into a conveyor to be processed into finished goods through drying, firing and cooling. And the
last
Linking Words
, the finished bricks will be delivered to storage houses or ships.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words clay with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: