The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The two maps illustrate the various changes

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the village of

Ryemouth

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Tynemouth

between 1995 and the present.

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, the village experienced a significant development to be more sport-oriented, with the addition of a golf and

atennis

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tennis

a tennis

course,

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the removal of the fishing port. Notably, only the hotel and housing areas remained unchanged. In

northeast

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corner, the former farmland and the forest park next to it

has

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been demolished and replaced with a large golf course with a tennis course inside. The housing areas in the northwest corner

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been expanded with the addition of houses and roads. The hotel to the south of the former forest park and the cafe on the opposite side of the road remained in the same position, but a new car park has been built next to the hotel.

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, shops originally located to the north of the

horizonal

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road have been converted into restaurants and the fish markets on the other side have been rebuilt into apartments to create more

accomodation

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accommodation

space.

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, the fishing port

that

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in the

sorth

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south

north

part of the village was totally removed.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

186 words

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Urban development
Infrastructure
Residential area
Commercial district
Public amenities
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Public transport
Urbanization
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