The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided
map
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illustrates the area which contains new factories and the accommodations for employees.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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each location is divided by the roads in the circle and the cross shapes. First of all, there are two industrial areas. One of them is located in the middle of the circle and the cross. Another is located in the
east south
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area of the
map
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.
In addition
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, you can find a meeting room between those industrial areas.
Also
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, there is a swimming pool next to the housing locations just the right corner of the
map
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. There is
also
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a parking lot and an office for workers. If you walk along the north road from the factories middle of the
map
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, you can see the office just left of you.
Furthermore
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, the parking lot is upward of the houses and the office.
Finally
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, the biggest housing area for employees is
the
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in the
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west south
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west-south
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direction of the circle road. There are a lot of facilities and houses for the staff.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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