Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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the arts

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very important, Some times they

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spends a lot of time on

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a place in communities. I prefer to spend

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see it is very important in my life ,

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have a free time , history books. The people who say the government are wasting

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understand what is

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see it clearly. So I'm sorry for them ,

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hope they visit an

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festival to read and learn about it. In the end , I'm trying to give piano

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, sometimes

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want to take acting

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. I can'

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say the people who don'

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believe in

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have wrong thinking but they only can'

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understand it, they only need to read about it and have some videos or

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for it , The government don'

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spend that

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for nothing , the spending because how the

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are important and maybe the

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think

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explain the point about

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and how governments can'

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skip the

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community.