The graph below show the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 dan 2005.

The graph shows the data about how many
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visitors in three countries over the period in question. Generally, the National
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in China experienced a consistent increase
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both museums MET and Edo saw a gradual fluctuation. Looking at the details, regarding the National
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in China, it began at 6
million
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people in 2000 and went up consistently, finishing at around 15
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in 2005. If we look at the Edo
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in Tokyo, the trend is different. Having remained stable at approximately 13
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in the first two-year period, the number dipped sharply to around six
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in 2003. There was
then
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a gradual rise to around 10
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in 2005.
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MET
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,
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shows a fluctuating number
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visitors. The figure started at 12
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in 2000,
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plunged dramatically to six
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in 2001 and there was a moderate recovery to around 7
million
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in 2003. After that, the number of visitors considerably doubled to 14
million
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tourists in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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