You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you’ve done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear sir, I am writing

this

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letter to provide my response

for

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the cookery course I was enrolled

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in.

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During the

course

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I like the way how combination of theory and

practicle

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practical

practice

classes

delivered

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to students. I learned different

recepies

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recipes

for all the

non-vegeterian

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non-vegetarian

dishes and most

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, I got

chance

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to taste all of them.

Course

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was for 30 days and we were cooking everyday new dishes. Which was helpful to learn cooking methods more effectively.

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, we were allowed to cook

dish

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we learned

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day. During the Journey, I established good

relatinships

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relationships

with other participants.

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, now we are inviting each other for dinner parties and cooking the

recepies

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recipes

we learned. In Future, I

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like to learn more tasty ways

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vegetarian dishes. Especially, curries and gravies because my Mother is a big fan of North Indian food and I will plan to cook her favourite food on her birthday.

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Your

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faithfully, Ashish

ashish050721Sat May 17 2025

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grammar

Ensure to proofread for spelling errors, such as 'practicle' (practical) and 'recepies' (recipes). This will enhance your professionalism.

structure

Consider breaking your ideas into clearer paragraphs to maintain focus on a single idea per section. For instance, separate your enjoyment from your cooking experiences.

task achievement

Try to be a bit more specific in your suggestions for future courses, possibly naming a few dishes or techniques you'd like to learn more about.

content

You provided a detailed description of what you enjoyed about the course, particularly the balance of theory and practical classes.

content

You expressed personal experiences and future aspirations, making your letter engaging and relatable.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

156 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

esteemed
comprehensive
curriculum
culinary skills
advanced techniques
passionate
engaging
inspiring
instructions
tips and tricks
hands-on approach
beneficial
culinary creativity
confidence
delicious meals
future courses
specialized
international cuisine
culinary traditions
flavors
techniques
culinary horizons
global gastronomy
broaden
achieve
stepping stone
passion
institution
recommend
attending
attention
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