The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.
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in 1986
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but in 1990 was rose
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decreased from 1986 to 1989
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from1989 to 1990

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • increase
  • decrease
  • region
  • peak
  • analysis
  • supply and demand
  • economic factors
  • trade agreements
  • climatic conditions
  • resilience
  • comparison
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