The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.

The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
The graphs illustrate a comparison
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of people dying caused by six illnesses and budgets for medical research in
Someland
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Homeland
. In summary, big funds in the study of certain illnesses contribute to cutting the
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of people who die from the diseases. The highest disease counts were caused by TB with the lowest funding in the study.
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, AIDS gets most of the funding and the rate of death is quite low, with Leprosy having the lowest
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of deaths. The first chart depicts that the most contributing cause of death in Someland is TB. The second contributor is diarrhoea, followed by Malaria and three other diseases. In the context of research funding, AIDS has the highest budget, around 175 million, with a quite low
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of deaths. The second and third big funds are for Leprosy and Tropical Diseases, about 75 million, followed by Diarrhea and Malaria, approximately 50 million.
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, TB was funded with the least budget, and we can see the impact of the cut on the
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of people dying was low.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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