The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

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first birth from 1996 to 2006 in Australia. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that in the first period, the younger females had

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higher number of births compared to the older.

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of the period, women having

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first baby were more dispersed from 19 to 39 years old. Focusing on the beginning of the observed time, individuals tended to have kids in their early ages at under 24 years old, contributing 50% higher than others. The interesting statistics depicted that the age 19-24 was the highest proportion which was more than 60%.

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individuals

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a birth. Turning

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rest of the categories, even though the elderly still had the lesser statistics

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the younger, the most significant number of the babies born was from females aged around 25-30 at 50%.

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, in 2006, 30-34 years old was the most significant figure of having babies at just above 40%.