The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the answers
of
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a conducted survey about Australian purchasing and drinking trends in five
cities
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in Australia.
Overall
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, the rate of the ones who visited a cafe for both options in the
last
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four weeks was the highest of all the
cities
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except for Adelaide.
On the other hand
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, the
percentages
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of the people who purchased a fresh coffee were the lowest of all
cities
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. The
proportions
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proportion
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of residents who went to buy
to
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at
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a cafe peaked at approximately 64
percent
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in Hobart.
Similarly
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, Melbourne reached the same level.
In contrast
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, Adelaide had a trough of just below 50%.
Whereas
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, the
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for Sydney and Brisbane vary at round (61% and 56%) respectively.
While
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habitants who had instant coffee in the
last
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4 weeks peaked at almost 54% followed by Brisbane at
roghly
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roughly
53% and the other three
cities
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saw variation, the
percentages
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for
australians
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who bought
a
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fresh coffee were the lowest
percentages
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in all five
cities
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.
moreover
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, Brisbane had the lowest rate at around 34%,
while
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Sydney was the highest at almost 44%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, percentages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • preferences
  • café culture
  • survey results
  • comparable
  • indicate
  • reflect
  • regional
  • cultural influences
  • drinking habits
  • percentage
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