‏In some countries, university students live far away from home and in another city or country while studying. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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travels
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to get their education in
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university
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opportunity
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salaries.In
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most of the
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gain
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skills
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from experience in another
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they will build their language
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our
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home
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many things
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thinking , behaviorand enhance our character
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especially
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study
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university
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very expensive for a lot of pupils.
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if did not get a scholarship from the government or university
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continue
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education.
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sick they miss their family , friends
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pupils
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culture they have a shock . And they might get shocked to see
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foods maybe they will have a not good with a new food do not like it.Even the hard experience with hard
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in their language.
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conclusion the significance difference between the
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arguments
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study
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study
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far from
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my
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study
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far from
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to gain my education and learning a new language and
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will
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myself
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to make
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great opportunities
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in the future

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • independence
  • personal growth
  • cultural exposure
  • networking opportunities
  • academic advantages
  • homesickness
  • financial burden
  • adaptability
  • social awareness
  • globalized world
  • stress and anxiety
  • adjustment
  • living expenses
  • specialized courses
  • research facilities
  • professional connections
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