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Band 7

You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: ⦁ Give the details of your journey ⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you ⦁ Suggest what can the manager do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with documents that I left in one of your cabs.
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 Monday, I booked a taxi through the Mobile app for a destination from the International Airport of Vancouver to Unit 4 Fulton Street of Surrey and heavy bags.
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 , I took my all other stuff except one file folder. I remember
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 the name of the driver was Shoranjit and Baba Deep Singh Ji Singh's name tag was hung in his car. My lather grey Colour file has a number of documents especially (my medical report) is which is Urgent for tomorrow as I have an appointment with a skin doctor. He will go
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 in my medication after analysing the report of skin. The Cost of medicine is really expensive and in order to take medicine, having a report is necessary
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 it will be delayed. I Kindly request you to Contact the Cab's driver and check for papers. Definitely, they kept the file safely. I would appreciate it if you could return my file back by tomorrow. Thank your time and assistance. Look forward to your responses. Yours faithfully Navpreet Kaur

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to have clear paragraphs, each with one main idea. This helps readers follow your message more easily.
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Be a bit more polite in your request. Use phrases like 'I would greatly appreciate' instead of 'I kindly request'.
coherence and cohesion
Check your spelling and grammar for clarity. For example, 'my lather grey Colour file' should be 'my light grey file'.
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You provided specific details about your journey, which helps in understanding the situation.
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Your tone is generally polite and respectful, which is good for a formal letter.
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