our health.
It is believed by some people that we should not eat
meat
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for many reasons.
Linking Words
for
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For
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example,some people
they
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apply
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do not eat
meat
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because it is
illegale
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illegal
in
there
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their
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riligen
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religion
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Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and give reasons to support it.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear and simple sentences to express your ideas. This will help with readability.
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Add more examples and explanations to strengthen your argument. This will make your points clearer.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has one main idea, and use connecting words to link your thoughts.
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You have a clear opinion that eating meat is necessary for health, which is a good starting point.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
In the present time, the majority of the commoners have preferred to rather than spending some periods living with their friends in the public community. Therefore, I would like to discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this statement
In today’s fast-paced world, scientific advancement has become a key factor to ensure a secure and fulfilling life, this is why some people argue that the people’s lives improvement should be the most important goal of science. Personally, I agree and believe that if other aims such as discovering the unknown windows of the universe or producing war-related equipment are valued over the former aim, mankind will witness the detrimental consequences of these approaches.
It can be seen that protecting and repairing ancient buildings is extremely expensive. Some believe that they should be demolished and rebuilt in a more modern style, while others believe that they should be maintained and retained. This article will explore the arguments in favour of the latter viewpoint and demonstrate why I disagree with it.
With the advent of the Internet and communication technology, an increasing number of consumers are turning to online shopping rather than traditional brick-and-mortar retail. While this trend offers unparalleled convenience, I contend that it has detrimental effects on local entrepreneurs.
In an era characterized by rapid advancements in the field of technology and artificial intelligence, it has become increasingly common for robots to carry out domestic chores and workplace tasks, particularly in advanced countries. While this situation brings clear benefits associated with time savings, I believe that it poses more serious challenges in terms of unemployment and poverty.