our health.
It is believed by some people that we should not eat
meat
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for many reasons.
Linking Words
for
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For
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they
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apply
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do not eat
meat
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because it is
illegale
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illegal
in
there
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their
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riligen
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religion
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Make sure to clearly state your opinion in the introduction and give reasons to support it.
coherence and cohesion
Use clear and simple sentences to express your ideas. This will help with readability.
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Add more examples and explanations to strengthen your argument. This will make your points clearer.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has one main idea, and use connecting words to link your thoughts.
task achievement
You have a clear opinion that eating meat is necessary for health, which is a good starting point.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
It is widely believed that youngsters in a number of nations are without jobs and do not have any skills, however, the army is actively recruiting new members. Hence, service in the armed forces is helpful, and I partially agree with the statement that military service should be compulsory, as it is helpful, yet can be traumatic.
History is basically the origin of a nation, which helps us to know our real identity. Some believe that the past has no practical advantages to provide. While others think that history helps us to learn about the present. This essay will discuss both arguments, I believe that our past helps us understand the present.
People recently have faced lots of celebrities most of them are known for their beautiful faces and the huge money which they owe ,rather than their abilities. That is a wrong perception for others specifically youths who tend to mimic celebrities. I agree with this statement somewhat but I think it is not totally true.
Nowadays, the balance between equality and personal achievement remains a crucial question. It is argued that personal accomplishment depends only on individual merits and thus, if people are free to succeed or fail because of their own work. I totally disagree with that statement. I believe that to succeed we need to have enough resources and also if we live in an egalitarian society, individuals could focus more on their goals.