In many countries, formal exams are used to assess students' abilities and to judge the success of their education. what are the advantages and disadvantages of using formal exams to assess students'abilities ? Do you think the benefits of using formal exams outweigh the drawbacks?

There is no doubt, that after completing semesters
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have to appear in the formal
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so that their abilities can be judged by the schools or colleges.
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, they become eligible to get
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in higher
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,
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tendency
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assessing
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is more advantageous, it becomes helpful for
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to get success in their education. It is often claimed that
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students
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have to sit in
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so that they can show their
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what they have learnt in their classes. Appearing in
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also
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motivate them to achieve gold medals, and
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trophies
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of
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competitions
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such
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and so on, are used to
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in our colleges by which
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were examined.
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, it creates
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sense of accomplishment and
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appreciation
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their examination with flying
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, there
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more
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to get
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admission
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universities as compared to the other
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. Eventually, they will get more
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opportunities
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search. on the other side, there could be minor drawbacks of
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assessing
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through annual
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because sometimes they could not perform well
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burden of studies, mental stress and lack of
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relaxation
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, there are some pupils who are not
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interested
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as maths and science but they can accomplish success in other fields like sports and music. To demonstrate it , there might be
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who are less likely to pay attention
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traditional subjects but they might have the
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to become a
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in their lives. To
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recapitulate
, examining learners through formal
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can be more advantageous yet its drawbacks cannot be fully neglected. I believe that there should be
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syllabus assigned to the
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so that they do not have
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of
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of the examination.

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Make sure your thesis statement clearly shows your main point about formal exams in the introduction.
coherence cohesion
Add clearer links between your ideas to help the reader follow your argument better.
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Use more specific examples to support your points, like mentioning specific subjects or skills to illustrate your ideas.
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You highlighted both advantages and disadvantages of formal exams well.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion summarizes your points nicely, showing your overall opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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