The graph below shows data on the number of travellers using three major british airports between 1998 and 2003. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows data on the number of travellers using three major british airports between 1998 and 2003. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows data on the number of travellers using three major british airports between 1998 and 2003. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The provided table illustrates the number of tourists using
Heathrow
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,
Gatwick
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, and Stansted
Airport
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from 1998 to 2003 in
millions
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.
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,
Gatwick
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Airport
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consistently led the other two airports, except in 2001, when
Heathrow
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Airport
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peaked with 48.2 million travellers per year. Looking at the details,
Heathrow
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Aeroport experienced a significant climb between 1998 and 2000,
while
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other
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two Airports
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consistently escalated. In the next decade, the number of Stansted Air station visitors remained constant at 43.3
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millions
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million
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per year,
whereas
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the amount of
Heathrow
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Airport
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visitors fluctuated between 37.1
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millions
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and 45.6
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millions
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. At the same time,
Gatwick
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lovers rocketed by 22
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millions
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million
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of
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travelers
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travellers
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In addition
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, the number of
Gatwick
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Airport
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travellers barely doubled throughout the period, reaching almost 70 million. A comparison shows that
Gatwick
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remained the busiest
Airport
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, and
Heathrow
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and Stansted came in second and third place, with 45.6 and 43.3 million individuals per year respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words heathrow, gatwick, airport, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • travellers
  • airports
  • increase
  • decrease
  • steady
  • highest
  • lowest
  • comparing
  • data
  • major
  • British
  • fluctuate
  • period
  • reach
  • growth
  • pattern
  • preferences
  • significant
  • decline
  • rise
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