The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts information about Sanditon town beach before and after the airport was built.
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, the airport was redesigned. It expanded and became modernized with the addition of new facilities and infrastructure. Before its development, there was a check-in desk and cafe adjacent to each other in the
departures
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lounge
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. Moving out from the
departures
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lounge
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, there was a security passport control room which led to a walkway, where
pasengers
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passengers
made their way to their respective gates. In comparison to the
arrivals
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lounge
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which was totally empty. Presently, both the
departures
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and
arrivals
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lounge
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have new infrastructure. The
departures
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area now has a baggage drop section,
in addition
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to the cafe and check-in facilities that were situated there previously.
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, the
arrivals
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room has a cafe, an ATM, and a car hire service. There are shops after leaving the passport control desk from the
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area,
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there is still an unoccupied space after exiting passport control from the
arrivals
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lounge
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.
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, there is a sky train which aids
travelers
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travellers
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to get
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in getting
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to their different gates quickly. The number of gates
have
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has
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also
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increased significantly from 8 to 18.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words departures, lounge, arrivals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • airport
  • built
  • beach
  • houses
  • shops
  • facilities
  • expanded
  • tourism
  • construction
  • roads
  • access
  • travelers
  • population
  • developed
  • job opportunities
  • residential area
  • quiet
  • bustling
  • visitors
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