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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent times, the issue of reading habits has emerged as a matter of significant concern to the general public. Some individuals maintain that printed newspapers or
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 will not be bought
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 the development of free e-
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 or online newspapers in the future.
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 ,I partially agree with
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 to offer a comprehensive analysis of these viewpoints. On the one hand, people should recognize that digital reading has become more widespread in modern life. A very important point to consider is that many websites offer free e-
books
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 or up-to-date new which is more convenient and cost-saving .
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 means that it helps people to access easy information everywhere with an internet connection. An example of
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 trend is Google
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books
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, where users can read various
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 without payment.
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, it is equally important to consider that printed materials still offer irreplaceable value. One convincing argument is that physical
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 provide a deeper reading experience and reduce eye strain.
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 suggests that many individuals, especially students and older readers, still lean toward
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 screens.
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, many schools and libraries continue to invest in printed
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 because they enhance the quality
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 and eye health of
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. In conclusion,
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 it is true that online reading is convenient and widely used, it is
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 undeniable that printed newspapers or
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 present numerous benefits
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 health protection. Personally, I believe that printed materials will continue to exist because they play a vital role in education and information.
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, a balanced approach is necessary to address
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 issue effectively.

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Expand your points with more details or examples to support your arguments. This will strengthen your essay.
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You have clear viewpoints and supported your ideas well with examples.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction presents the topic nicely and states your position clearly.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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