You have recently noticed that your work computer is getting too slow and out-of-date. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain the problems with your computer -give some examples of how this has affected your work -make some suggestions for what can be done to help adress this issue

Dear Mr Sam, I am writing
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letter to express the issue I have been facing with the
computer
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of
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my office desk. Before
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a few
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weeks, everything was working properly with the
computer
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weeks back, it started freezing for five minutes and
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it restarted automatically.
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happened
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I was on
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meeting online and was preparing
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a presentation
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happened two times after that it's taking ages to start in
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. During the day, If I have to upload some documents
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computer
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the computer
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it's taking
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longer times than before. I checked the date of manufacture and came to know that it is 15 years
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15-year-old
computer
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result
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a result
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,
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has affected my schedule very significantly. I have more than ten files to upload but I can't upload them in
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one day.
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, it will take
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3 days to submit.
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, I
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was
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supposed to complete them
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last
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monday
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Monday
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.
According to
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me, by calling
customer
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the customer
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service of
HP
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the HP
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compnay
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company
we can get some
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, there is
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option to replace the older one with
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a new
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new
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new one
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. I look forward to your prompt
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reply
. Yours faithfully, Saijbir Kaur.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to structure your letter clearly with distinct paragraphs for each point. This will help in guiding the reader through your message.
task achievement
Try to use a more formal tone in your letters, especially in a workplace setting. This includes using correct spellings and avoiding casual phrases.
task achievement
You have clearly stated the problems with your computer, which shows that you are aware of the issues.
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You included specific examples of how the computer's issues have affected your work, which helps to illustrate your point.
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