. You have been accepted by a university in Canada. Before moving to Canada, you want to gather some information from International Officer. Write to him about your needs. In your letter • introduce yourself • inquire about accommodation options • seek information on Student Discount Card

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to acquire some important knowledge about the university where I have been accepted. Before Moving to Canada, I want to make sure I know the proper rules and regulations. My name is Amanjot

kaur

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Kaur

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, currently living in India and

has

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have

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recently completed

diploma

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my diploma

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in Business Marketing for 2 years. Fortunately, your university has approved my application for foreign study in Information

technology

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course

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Seneca

college

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College

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. I would like to know more about

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college including accommodation, transportation and medical services.

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, please let me know if renting a shared room is possible for next month for another four months, and I hope

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accommodation will be near to my college.

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yours

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your

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assistance

for

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with

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transportation

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as if I can buy

any

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cheap monthly pass rather than buying

ticket

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every day. I am

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willing to know when the student discount card will be issued to me, and

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this

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student discount card can help us

relieving

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our debt if needed.

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, please let me know all the information as soon as possible. I am looking forward to your prompt response. Thank you Yours Sincerely, Amanjot Kaur

amanjotkaur0303Mon May 26 2025

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task achievement

Add a clear subject line to your letter to indicate its purpose.

coherence and cohesion

Break down your request for information into clear and separate paragraphs.

general

Check your spelling and grammar for small mistakes, such as in your introduction.

task achievement

You included all important points in your letter.

suitable writing tone

Your tone is polite and respectful throughout the letter.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

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All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

198 words

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