Write a letter to a translation agency about a report that you need to have translated urgently. Include -The content of your report -Why you need it translated -Why it is urgent

Dear Sir , I am writing
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letter to get
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assistance from your prestigious company to translate a report. I am Sam Sharman , working as
assistant
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an assistant
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manager in
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international company. I have a client who is Korean and he doesn't under English language . He was unable to arrange a translator for the meeting.
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, he is a very precious client to our company. Please translate,
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time our CEO can do only 30 % business in
textile
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and 15 % in cosmetics items ,
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he wants more than 50 % money in advance in order to
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the deal . All the supplies will be delivered within a month after the advance payment.
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,
last
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year business brought lucrative profit and we are looking for many more opportunities to come . Please translate
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report
in
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a
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Korean language so , he will get
overview
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and take his decision as soon as possible . I
also
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attach the original file along
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this
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letter . I am looking forward to hearing from you . Best regards, Sam

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to have a clear introduction, main body, and conclusion. This helps the reader follow your ideas better.
coherence and cohesion
Try to break up your ideas into separate paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea.
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Use a more formal tone in your letter, especially since it is a business communication.
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Be more specific about the urgency. Explain why the translation is needed quickly.
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You clearly stated the need for translation and provided background about the client.
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You included relevant information about the report's content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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