Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of foods imported from countries all across the world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Many supermarkets prefer to sell
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different
types of foreign food
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rather than domestically grown
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.
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trend has more benefits,
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essay will discuss it followed by
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relevant
examples. The primary advantage of imported
foods
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is
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the avilability
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avilability
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availability
of foreign
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edible
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enable
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for consumers, people nowadays
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for
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exotic fruits, vegetables and
seed
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seeds
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that are out of season locally. As
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provide these
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and get double profit.
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allows benefits for both customers and supermarkets.
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,
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recevie
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receive
profit from imported
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and
consumer
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consumers
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get
high quality
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rare products. The secondary advantage is
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waste reduction. Imported
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often have longer shelf lives, allowing supermarkets to reduce waste.
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other countries import frozen
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that can survive longer than locally
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produced
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so, it helps to lower food waste.
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one is economic support to other countries, food from
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abroad
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good opportunities to make
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a strong
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bond between
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the two
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countries. Apart from it helps to create jobs in those regions. For
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,
importation
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the importation
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of dry fruits
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high profit
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value and new jobs in that sector as it has high
demands
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demand
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. The disadvantage of imported
foods
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is
reduction
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the reduction
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of
economy
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the economy
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in
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of
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own country. Despite of own
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products
shops
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start
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to rely on
foregin
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foreign
foods
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,
local
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and local
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workers and industries
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to face loss.
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, the local farmers and
producation
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production
houses face loss and workers
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become
jobless, eventually
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overall
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national economy.
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, the benefits of foreign
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has
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more weight than disadvantages
of
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it
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apply
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because these
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allows
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shops
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, consumers and job workers to create new ways to earn more.

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grammar
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examples
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structure
Organize your essay with clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should have one main idea that is easy to follow.
content
You have a good understanding of the topic and present both advantages and disadvantages.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
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    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nowadays
  • supermarkets
  • variety
  • imported
  • produce
  • advantage
  • disadvantage
  • consumer
  • choice
  • diet
  • exotic
  • season
  • support
  • economy
  • jobs
  • shelf life
  • waste
  • access
  • growth
  • food supply
  • local
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