The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the porth harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These maps provide key information about how Porth Harbour has changed from 2000 until nowadays.

Overall

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, it is clear from the maps that significant developments have been made to the southeast

side

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of the map, where it is shown that new facilities were constructed,

whereas

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the building in the corner was replaced.

In addition

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, to the main road's

side

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, many

changes

Add the auxiliary verb

changes have

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also

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been made,

such

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fishing

Correct article usage

the fishing

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boats' removal and the new roads' building.

According to

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what is shown, the new hotel

side

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had major developments. There was a castle in 2000, which appears to be abandoned, and near the castle is

the

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public beach for everyone to utilise. Recently, they added a coffee and a new road that leads to the hotel. In terms of the public beach

side

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, it was public in 2000 and

remaind

Correct your spelling

remained

remain

remind

public until now.

Moreover

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, a boat was added

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besides

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beside

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the old boat, and the dock was expanded to

accomidate

Correct your spelling

accommodate

more boats.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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Nowadays congestion and Traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be the solution, in our opinion?