What do you see as the main reasons for gender inequality

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the question of whether
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stereotypes are hinged on biological sex differences has been
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the forefront of debates.
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roles are mostly rooted in societal assumptions about dissimilar behaviours expected between men and
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.
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,
women
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face inequality in several aspects of their
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. The solution is neither quick nor easy and
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government and social involvement. Is widely believed that the physiological disparities betwixt sexes meant specific traits in men and
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.
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, boys are considered strong, assertive, independent and competitive,
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girls
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are thought caring, gentil, empathic and meek.
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, most of these constructs are not innate but they are culturally accepted, and children internalize them very early.
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, there are
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stereotypes, different characteristics and behaviours expected
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sex. These roles are daily strengthened by their environment from family to social net.
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, it is easy to guess the consequences of stereotyping.
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are pushed to choices in careers that will lead to underpaid jobs, they are
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that being mothers and
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care of others must be their priority,
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boys are expected to be the main breadwinners
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and fight for preeminence in social and professional fields.
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perform the bulk of housework and upbringing
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children, and,
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, they often work
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, with little chance to be
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or to improve their knowledge so that they might aspire to a better job.
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, they are sentenced to be
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on home and family, with weak participation areas merit of social importance. The solution
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complex and will take decades since the situation is profoundly rooted. Governments should promote fair laws, foster cultural changes and share the effort with
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organizations and civil society in order to, step by step, they all together could change the global mindset and accomplish a new fairer society without any kind of discrimination. In conclusion,
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stereotypes are social and cultural assumptions that make
girls
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and boys behave in
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different
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leading to a reality that precludes
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a
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first-class
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. It will take a long time to solve
this
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injustice because it is deeply entrenched in tradition. There will be required
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implication
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,
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the government and the whole society.

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Try to provide more specific examples to support your points. For instance, mention actual laws or programs that promote gender equality.
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Make sure each paragraph focuses on one main idea. This will help clarify your points.
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Your introduction presents the topic clearly and establishes the context of gender inequality well.
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The conclusion effectively summarizes your main argument and suggests a way forward.

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