The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE TABLE AND PIE CHART COMPARE THE NUMBER OF
RESEARCH
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IN THE UNIVERSITIES OF AUSTRALIA FROM 2001 TO 2010.
OVERALL
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, IT IS SHOWN IN THE TABLE THAT THE MAJORITY OF
RESEARCH
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FROM INTERNATIONAL AND LOCAL
STUDENTS
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WAS IN 2010,
SECONDLY
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IN 2001,
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, FROM THE PIE CHART THE OPPOSITE IS DISPLAYED WHERE THE MAJORITY WAS FROM LOCAL
RESEARCH
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STUDENTS
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.
ACCORDING TO
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THE TABLE IN 2001, THERE WERE 33,657 LOCAL
RESEARCH
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STUDENTS
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AND ONLY 5,192 INTERNATIONAL
RESEARCH
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STUDENTS
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WITH 38,849 IN TOTAL.
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, THE PIE CHART COMPARES THE PROPORTION OF INTERNATIONAL AND LOCAL, STARTING WITH LOCAL MALES IN 2001
RESEARCH
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REACHED
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44% AND IN 2010 DECREASED TO 38%
ON THE OTHER HAND
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NON LOCAL MALE STARS WITH 9 PERCENT AND WATCHED A MINORITY INCREASED WITH ONLY 3%. GOING TO LOCAL FEMALES IT IS
ALSO
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SHOWN THAT IN 2001 WOMEN WERE AT 43% AND IN 2010 INCLINED WITH ONLY 5 PERCENT

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
Vocabulary: Replace the words research, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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