Write a letter to your friend who is moving to your hometown. In your letter: Describe your hometown Recommend a place to live Suggest things your friend can do in their free time

dear jack, I am writing to tell you a brief about Riyadh, The capital of Saudi Arabia. Here in

Riyadh

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Riyadh,

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you will see the magic city, In Riyadh we have

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apply

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great

places

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place

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such

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tha

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the

famous

resturant

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restaurant

pastaleta

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Pastaleta

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", euro nuggets and

choco

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chocolate

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milk circle

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Milk Circle

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. First of all, I recommend you to live in

ritz carelton

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Ritz Carelton

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. If it is fully booked you have another brilliant choice which is

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the hilton

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hilton

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Hilton

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. All of

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this

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these

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choices

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are

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perfect for all the services, room service, breakfast included and

24 hours

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24-hour

support center. Because you love football, I suggest the stadium at

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the guarden

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guarden

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Guarden

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sport

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sports

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centre, there is a nice stadium, either you want to play lonely or with us. the price will be about 20 dollars for each hour. I will call Ahmed, Saif, and John to join us and play together as we have

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apply

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free time during summer. Best regards, Azzam

azzam.alammari1Tue May 27 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to use more paragraphs. Each paragraph should have one main idea.

task achievement

Make sure to check for spelling mistakes and grammar errors, like 'resturant' should be 'restaurant'.

task achievement

You did well in suggesting a specific place to live.

suitable writing tone

Your letter has a friendly tone which is nice.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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