Its
is widely believed that an individual can become the Correct pronoun usage
It
most
happiest person in the world if they Change the adjective
apply
possess
Correct subject-verb agreement
possesses
wealth
. As Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
money
can provide access to everything Use synonyms
such
as travel, luxuries, properties, and investments. Linking Words
However
, others argue that Linking Words
money
cannot buy happiness and Use synonyms
individuals
can only find true Correct word choice
that individuals
joy
by experiencing Use synonyms
Use synonyms
fulfillment
. Change the spelling
fulfilment
This
essay will discuss both the Linking Words
persceptives
.
The first point of view, suggests that Correct your spelling
perspectives
wealth
equals Use synonyms
to
happiness. I agree with Change preposition
apply
this
notion as everything in the world has a price. Linking Words
For instance
, if an individual is passionate about travelling, they can only do it if they have enough Linking Words
money
to pay for travel expenses Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
accomodation
and airplane fare. Correct your spelling
accommodation
Moreover
, individuals with secure financial backgrounds can own their desired materialistic possessions Linking Words
such
as luxury cars, bags and shoes. Linking Words
Additionally
, they can have Linking Words
a
financial independence to invest in properties or business ventures to Remove the article
apply
further
increase their Linking Words
wealth
. Use synonyms
Linking Words
This
things provide independence, stability, and comfort to an individual, which can only be secured or owned by Change the determiner
These
money
, but these attributes can not guarantee true Use synonyms
joy
.
The second point of view, suggests that fortune can not buy Use synonyms
Use synonyms
fulfillment
, which Change the spelling
fulfilment
assist
Change the verb form
assists
individual's
Change noun form
individuals
to experience
Change preposition
in experiencing
joy
. The warmth of a loving family and Use synonyms
a
support of Correct article usage
the
an
close confidant Change the article
a
provides
emotional stability, fostering profound Correct subject-verb agreement
provide
moment
, which give life Fix the agreement mistake
moments
a
meaning. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, a fun dinner at a family gathering can foster a loving environment where an individual can feel loved, Linking Words
cherish
, and caredWrong verb form
cherished
.
These emotions provide a sense of Change preposition
for.
Use synonyms
fulfillment
. Change the spelling
fulfilment
A true
happiness comes from family, love, care and support, which can not be bought with currency. Remove the article
True
Thus
, Linking Words
money
cannot buy Use synonyms
true
sense of Add an article
a true
the true
joy
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
I agree that Linking Words
money
is Use synonyms
a
Change the article
an
intergral
part of our lives, providing stability, security, and independence to travel and buy Correct your spelling
integral
any thing
that an individual desires. Correct your spelling
anything
However
, securing Linking Words
wealth
is not Use synonyms
a
main way to be happy. The true way to experience Correct article usage
the
joy
is by sensing Use synonyms
Use synonyms
fulfillment
. Which an individual can experience by being loved, cherished, caredChange the spelling
fulfilment
, and
supported by family and Change preposition
for, and
love
ones. Change the form of the verb
loved
Therefore
, Linking Words
money
can only buy desires Use synonyms
not
true Add the comma(s)
, not
joy
.Use synonyms
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