Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing today to express my appreciation for the career fair event organized by the Directorate of Student Affairs of Carleton University.
The conference went pretty well, as there is a good scope of interacting and discussing with the multiple
company's
representatives regarding the future opportunities offered by them. Change noun form
company
Additionally
, It was a great place to increase your network in a specific job field by presenting your skill set via an updated resume.
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observed that some people are struggling to get to the right company's desk, which has current or future offerings regarding the specific field of any individual.
I will suggest thatUnnecessary verb
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,
more help desk representatives should be allocated in future as a part of better event planning.
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the end, I would like to Change the preposition
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appreciate
the entire DSA team for organizing Verb problem
thank
such
a remarkable career fair event.
Sincerely,
MohitLinking Words