SOME PEOPLE PREFER RURAL LİFE AND THE OTHERS PREFER LIVING IN THE CITIES.WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THEIR PREFERENCES.WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES ABOUT THIS SITUATION

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, on the other side mankind
like
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to live in busy cities, there is a vast difference between rural and urban
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area
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. community can find peace in domestic
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area
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and in metro cities public can earn more,
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get more job opportunities and
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business
scope in urban localities.
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the prefrence
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prefrence
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preference
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living in
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a city
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or town
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totaly
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totally
dpends
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depends
on choice. Nowadays, everybody
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their own choices to choose where they want to stay.
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of living in
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the countyside
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countyside
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countryside
is
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we can
get
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more
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a more
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peaceful life, and we can
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feel
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nature`s touch. Otherside of
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is we get
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oportunities
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opportunities
for
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jobs
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and
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business
,
scope
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of success
if
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significantly
reduce
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in rural land.
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article from CNBC says,
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who belongs to domestic
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area
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,
they having
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less per capita income than urban locals.
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, in
cities
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cities,
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people
are prefer
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to study more
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to towns. So
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of education
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downtown is way more than
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the countryside
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. so in cityscape
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the population
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is getting
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high scope than
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a village
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. we can
aslo
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also
get more resources like
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, tubes, restaurants, and shopping malls etc...
this
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is the other
banifits
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benefits
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to live
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of living
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in
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a muncipal
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muncipal
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municipal
area
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university
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of
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New York
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says,
population
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the population
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who
leaves
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in metrocities they are more educated
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to
rurals
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the rurals
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. In
conclusion
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we can say life
in
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downtown is more wealthy and on
other
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the other
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side, we can
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say
that
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the benifits
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benifits
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benefits
for
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of
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living
in
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less population can give us a touch of
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nature
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as well we can get more peace.

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