The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Assel

The two maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in a park between 1980 and the present day. Looking from an

overall

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perspective, it has become

significant

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a significant

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development for visitors with additional recreational facilities for outdoor eating, playing and seating and some natural features being replaced. In 1980, the public place there was one way to get in. An entrance looking on the left side above there was a pond surrounded 3 benches,

near

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and near

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the bottom left corner, there was a flower garden. Now two gates have disappeared, the road

are

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less straight with several parts and pond has more benches,

flowers

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and flowers

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have changed into bushes.

In the

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The

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bottom right area of the map

also

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has been transformed into a picnic and barbecue zone with chairs,

desks

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and desks

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Additionally

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, a new playground has been built in the bottom right corner of the park. The trees in the top right area have been preserved.

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May 29, 2025

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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153 words

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