The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration are 2 maps, relating to changes which are likely to take place in a
cinema
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from 1980 to the present day.
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, it can be clearly seen that
cinema
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has undergone significant changes in order to create new recreational areas.
Additionally
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, the drinks store has been changed to be more economical. It is worth noting that the car park has disappeared and space has been used in order for these developments. Beginning with
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cinema
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Cinema
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1 in the southwest of the train station,
this
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cinema
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has been relocated to the left side of the toilet, leaving space for the construction of a relaxation room
along with
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a new food and drinks shop. Moving across the entrance, the ticket counter remains unchanged,
however
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, the drinks shop nearby has been replaced with a DVD shop. Turning to the remaining information, in 1980, on the northern side of the map, there was a car park, but now it has been transferred into a number of cinemas numbered from 1 to 5.
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,
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2 has been rearranged to the top left corner of the map and the toilet stays in the same place.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cinema with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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