The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Presented for consideration are 2 maps, relating to changes which are likely to take place in a

cinema

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from 1980 to the present day.

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, it can be clearly seen that

cinema

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has undergone significant changes in order to create new recreational areas.

Additionally

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, the drinks store has been changed to be more economical. It is worth noting that the car park has disappeared and space has been used in order for these developments. Beginning with

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cinema

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Cinema

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1 in the southwest of the train station,

this

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cinema

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has been relocated to the left side of the toilet, leaving space for the construction of a relaxation room

along with

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a new food and drinks shop. Moving across the entrance, the ticket counter remains unchanged,

however

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, the drinks shop nearby has been replaced with a DVD shop. Turning to the remaining information, in 1980, on the northern side of the map, there was a car park, but now it has been transferred into a number of cinemas numbered from 1 to 5.

Moreover

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cinema

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2 has been rearranged to the top left corner of the map and the toilet stays in the same place.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cinema with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

192 words

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