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The bar chart shows how worldwide sales of games software, CDs and DVDs/videos changed in the period from 2000 to 2003

The bar chart shows how worldwide sales of games software, CDs and DVDs/videos changed in the period from 2000 to 2003
The bar chart shows how worldwide
sales
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 of
games
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software
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, CDs and
DVDs
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/
videos
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 changed in the period from 2000 to 2003.
Overall
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, the
sales
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 of
games
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software
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 and
DVDs
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/
videos
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 increased steadily each year.
However
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, CDs enjoyed the highest
sales
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 throughout
this
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 period. In 2000, CD
sales
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 were much higher than those of the other two products. They totalled 35
billion
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dollars
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, compared with 18
billion
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 and 15
billion
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dollars
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 for
DVDs
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/
videos
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 and
games
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sofware
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software
, respectively. Global
sales
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 of
games
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software
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 grew steadily, reaching a figure of 18
billion
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dollars
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 in 2002,
while
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 the figure for
DVDs
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/
videos
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 went up to about 27
billion
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dollars
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 in the same year.
In contrast
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, worldwide
sales
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 of CDs witnessed a gradual decline during the years shown, falling to 32
billion
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dollars
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 in 2003.
This
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 was still slightly higher than
sales
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 of
DVDs
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/
videos
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, which reached a peak of 30
billion
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dollars
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 in 2003. In that year,
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games
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game
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software
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sales
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also
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 rose again, finishing at 19
billion
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dollars
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the tenth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, games, software, dvds, videos, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the tenth paragraph.
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