The amount of time spent on traveling to work has significantly increased in the past few decades. Discuss the causes and effects of this situation, and provide possible solutions.

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decades
people
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more
time
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on
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commuting to work. It might
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due to
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several reasons like urban sprawl, traffic
conjestion
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congestion
, disfunction of public transport.
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these problems exist, I will
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describe possible solutions to them. The first reason behind long travelling
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can be
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of jobs. It implies that these days most
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the
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companies prefer to settle down in city
centers
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higher access
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services; including
transporation
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transportation
and food.
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, the city centre of Toronto is full of different types of offices and food industry businesses, for which most
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people
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spend hours
of
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travelling
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due to
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using different types of
transporttaion
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transportation
in order to reach
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destination. Without
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, the placement of jobs
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people
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to
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spend most of their
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just on travelling and
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at
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the end they feel exhausted.
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,
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reason which becomes an issue
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the 21st century is
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increasing number of vehicles on the roads. It means that the increasing number of cars or transportation on the roads leads to
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higher congestion from year to year, and
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this
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reason
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people
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commute longer the same distances than it was before.
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, another cause might be the disfunction of public transportation which is widely used by working
people
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.
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, one of the frequently used types of public
transportion
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transportation
in Toronto is
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subway;
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, despite
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many lines of the subway,
people
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might face delays
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some
disfunctions
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dysfunctions
. These things make
people
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feel
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as they are usually late for these
unforessen
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unforeseen
situations.
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, several solutions
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exist to improve these problems. One of them is to increase branches of companies throughout the country,
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especially when a country is big. the second solution
improve
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schedules of
ransportation
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transportation
and to check
theri
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their
functioning before starting the day. In conclusion,
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these problems exist with
traveling
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travelling
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,
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however
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it is possible to bring solutions which might mitigate
people
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's life and not
to
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spend more
time
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on roads.

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You have identified important causes and solutions regarding the increase in travel time to work.

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  • Introduction
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  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

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