The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The charts present
comparison
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a comparison
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of the United State citizen's expenses in 7 different categories in the two years 1966 and 1996.
Overall
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, the majority of the expenses in the two years
was
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food and cars.
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a significant portion of American expenses was food in 1966, that was replaced by cars to become the highest category in 1996.
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the
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food was the highest category in 1966 making up around half of the proportion, by 1996 it fell by 30% to be the second highest category at 14%. In 1966 books decreased from 6% to 1% of the proportion.
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, petrol and furniture were 9% and 10% , respectively, in the beginning of the period, slightly declined by approximately one per cent. In 1996, cars saw a noticeable growth of 20%, after it was a quarter in 1966, to be almost half of the American expanses.
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computers accounted for one-tenth
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of the total in 1966, it increased by 9% in 1996. whilst restaurants rose by half of it
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in
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total, from 7% to 14%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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