The pictures show the process of making cherry jam

The illustration depicts how cherry
jam
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is prepared. The 9-step begins with shaking
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the cherry’s
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cherry’s
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cherry
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tree and ends with
labeling
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labelling
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on
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apply
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new products
This
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is achieved by turning cherries into
jam
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that can
then
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be turned into commercial goods. The process starts with
vibrating
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a vibrating
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tree ,so that can crops
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be dropped on the ground.Which are
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collected and transported by truck to a processing plant to be stored by a machine. When they have been correctly stored
of
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apply
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stems and leaves,
they
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are washed and removed stones in the middle of
fruit
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the fruit
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.
At
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In
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step 5 the cherries
is
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are
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cooked in
a specialised equipment
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specialised equipment
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with extra
ingredient
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ingredients
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such
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as lemon juice and sugar etc , so can
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the resulting
jam
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be checked by a person. After
that
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that,
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the
jam
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is put into jars which are
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stuck a label on the goods.

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Your essay needs a clear introduction that explains what the pictures show.
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Add more specific details about each step in the process to support your main points.
task achievement
You have a clear outline of the steps involved in making cherry jam.
coherence and cohesion
You use chronological order to present the steps, which helps in understanding the process.

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