The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the cyclical process involved in producing ethanol, a renewable biofuel made from plants.
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, the production process involves three main stages: pre-processing, processing, and usage. It forms a closed-loop cycle, as carbon dioxide emitted
at the end
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is reused as a resource in the initial stage.
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, trees and plants absorb sunlight and carbon dioxide to grow. Once mature, they are harvested using tractors and shredded by large machinery to extract cellulose.
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cellulose is
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transported to
processing
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the processing
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facility, where is converted into sugars. Microbes are added to the sugars to initiate fermentation, which produces ethanol. The ethanol
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subsequently
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used as fuel for various modes of transport,
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as cars, trucks, and airplanes. During
combustion
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the combustion
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process in the vehicle machines, carbon dioxide is generated and released into the atmosphere.
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gas is
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absorbed and
use
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as
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energy again by plants and trees, completing the cycle.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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