Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while other think celebrities make the problem less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent times it has been observed by some, that problems are made less significant by celebrities,

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others believe that famous people supporting relief associations assist in highlighting issues that are

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ignored. Important personalities utilize their social status and credibility to vital difficulties which would

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be overlooked. It is

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these reasons that I agree with the former point of view.

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, some argue that the recommendations received from prominent personalities might overshadow an aid project.

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might cause the organization to be distracted from its main purpose and not perform as intended. Personage might provide a superficial look at the problems,

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a deeper understanding might be needed. The biggest fear

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endorsements is the lack of sustained attention

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required.

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, the star might move

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another project, leaving

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one without the backing

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essential to nip the problem in the bud.

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, it is not uncommon for any renowned person to not have a clout and a following. Their reputation in the international community certainly plays an important part

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support, especially in terms of helping those who belong to underdeveloped areas.

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individuals have the ability to provide a platform to stress the need for collective support.

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, the singer Akon who

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an African descent identified core issues and was able to gather funds for the development of schools and clean drinking water in different areas of Africa. In conclusion,

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most think that well-known individuals vouching for global philanthropic organizations might be

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essential to bring attention to pressing matters, other people believe that most

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are shadowed by

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individuals.

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, the power that celebrities wield to bring light to

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areas cannot be denied and it is because of these factors, that I agree with

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point of view.