You recently moved to a new city and you want to invite your friend to visit you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell them about your new home and the city Invite them to come and stay Tell them what you can do together during their visit

Dear Karan, I hope you are doing well.

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am writing

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letter to invite you to visit me ,as I have planned some activities to do together.

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with, As you know

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I

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changed my city

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month and

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came

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Brampton , because

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have recently

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my interview for

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uline

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warehouse job.

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, I am living in

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beautiful apartment and my room is located on

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floor ,

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which

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enjoy the sunrise and sunset view from my room window.

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this

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, In

Brampton

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Brampton,

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there are so many tourist places ,which

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want to visit with you . Moving

further

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,

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would like to request you to give

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to 5 days to me from your hectic

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schedule

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can

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enjoy new places with you,

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have not

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new friends here. I think

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is

good

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time for us to collect some latest memories. I have planned all things in advance

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so that we will not waste our time . As,

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we will

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go

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fall

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which is near me and it is

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famous city

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its fall areas and

garden

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.

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, we will go

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the most attractive place

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brampton

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Brampton

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,which is

trinity mall

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Trinity Mall

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. The next day, we will enjoy the blue mountain village too . we will eat food from the best restaurant . I hope you will definitely give some time

too

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me.

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am looking forward to

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from you. yours lovingly, Harpreet