You recently moved to a new city and you want to invite your friend to visit you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell them about your new home and the city Invite them to come and stay Tell them what you can do together during their visit

Dear Karan, I hope you are doing well.
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am writing
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letter to invite you to visit me ,as I have planned some activities to do together.
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with, As you know
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I
have
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changed my city
last
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month and
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came
in
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Brampton , because
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have recently
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my interview for
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uline
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warehouse job.
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, I am living in
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beautiful apartment and my room is located on
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floor ,
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which
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enjoy the sunrise and sunset view from my room window.
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this
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, In
Brampton
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there are so many tourist places ,which
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want to visit with you . Moving
further
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,
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would like to request you to give
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to 5 days to me from your hectic
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schedule
. So that,
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can
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enjoy new places with you,
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have not
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new friends here. I think
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is
good
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time for us to collect some latest memories. I have planned all things in advance
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so that we will not waste our time . As,
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we will
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go
the
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fall
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which is near me and it is
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the very
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famous city
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its fall areas and
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.
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, we will go
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the most attractive place
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brampton
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Brampton
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,which is
trinity mall
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Trinity Mall
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. The next day, we will enjoy the blue mountain village too . we will eat food from the best restaurant . I hope you will definitely give some time
too
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me.
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am looking forward to
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from you. yours lovingly, Harpreet

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greeting and closing
Try to start your letter with a proper greeting, such as 'Dear Karan,' and end it with a closing like 'Yours lovingly,' followed by your name.
single idea per paragraph
Make sure each paragraph focuses on one main idea to improve clarity. For example, you could separate your new home details, invitation, and planned activities into different paragraphs.
complete response
Check for common spelling mistakes and grammar, like 'i' should be 'I' and 'gotto' should be 'go to'. This will help make your writing clearer and more professional.
content
You included beautiful details about your apartment and city, which makes the invitation more appealing.
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You planned interesting activities for your friend's visit, which shows your excitement and encourages them to come.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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