IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

Some people believe that because of Modem technology, it is no longer Necessary For people to lean handwriting Skills, but others think that handwriting is Still an important Skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is frequently debated if writing manually is still important for people,
while
Linking Words
 many tools have appeared on the market, making it unnecessary for creating
high quality
Add a hyphen
high-quality
show examples
 texts. In my opinion,
although
Linking Words
 recent technologies will represent
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
 one-way solution to well communicate, I believe that learning handwriting still remains one of the crucial paths to developing fundamental skills, especially in young people. On the one hand, software and artificial intelligence have rapidly grown, opening several opportunities to replace traditional writing with computer-based ones.
This
Linking Words
 can be considered a great advancement for people who can profit
by
Change preposition
from
show examples
major
Correct article usage
the major
show examples
 effectiveness of their writing production.
For instance
Linking Words
,
this
Linking Words
 trend is evident even
it
Correct your spelling
in
show examples
 the journalistic field, where the intensive
use
Use synonyms
 of artificial intelligence has permitted a massive production of
well written
Add a hyphen
well-written
show examples
 articles.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, not only is the
use
Use synonyms
 of hand for manual writing useful for
body's
Correct article usage
the body's
show examples
 correct mobility, but it is
also
Linking Words
 crucial for the development of logical and critical thinking. In fact, it is demonstrated by recent research of San Raffaele University that the left temporal lobe of
brain
Add an article
the brain
show examples
 in teenagers who
use
Use synonyms
 handwriting to do their homework
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
 is 20% bigger than the ones who
use
Use synonyms
 exclusively computers.
This
Linking Words
 shows the importance of
practicing
Change the spelling
practising
show examples
 traditional writing with the aim of training our
brain
Fix the agreement mistake
brains
show examples
 and basic competencies. In conclusion,
although
Linking Words
 it is true that the role of modern technologies will take a significative place in driving new and more efficient writing production, I am convinced that
this
Linking Words
 should not replace the learning of handwriting skills as it represents a crucial factor for human development of brain and fundamental skills related to it.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that ties back to your main argument.
task achievement
Try to provide more specific examples or evidence to support your points further. You can add more details or data to strengthen your argument.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, making it easier for the reader to follow your argument.
task achievement
You've presented both sides of the argument well.
task achievement
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your opinion and restates the importance of handwriting.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »- a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: