Child trafficking has been brought to the forefront in recent years. What is the cause of this? What can be done to tackle it?

All across the globe, a troubling issue of trafficking
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is taking
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. The reasons behind
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criminal activity are the ease of exploiting the
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as well as
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not enough protection in
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for the vulnerable young. In order to rectify
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situation,
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need to be legislated on a global scale so the entire world can eradicate
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complication altogether. At the root of the problem of child trafficking lies a fundamental cause, the fact that the young are easily persuaded and lured out of their homes and
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forced into
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or worse, sold.
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these
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have no concept of what is happening as the kidnapping takes
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, the culprits know very well and take full advantage, using any means possible to entice the young. To put it another
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, the
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who are only innocent and
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have no
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of knowing how to handle the situation and
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comply without putting up a fight.
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, the criminals involved have a straightforward
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to make a profit by abusing
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’s weakness, their innocence. Another explanation of why child trafficking occurs is how many impoverished countries ignore or simply fail to address that it is taking
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.
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, these
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are trafficked for profit, where they are used for
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or even utilized in the sex trade and possibly even for their organs on the
black-market
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. The law and law enforcement agencies in several developing nations are vague or do not extensively cover
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crime, and even if they do, the corruption runs deep in the police force, allowing
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crime to continue even in broad daylight. Meanwhile, the
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are trapped in the system with no hope of a better life,
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of doing nothing but being young and born into a life of mistreatment. In order to solve the issue of trafficking of the young, focus needs to be put on the governments to mandate
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to ensure
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are shielded from
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social evil. Not only should the prosecution of trafficking cases be prioritized, but the guilty should be sentenced in a
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that deters others from following the same path, perhaps with a lengthy prison sentence or even the death penalty.
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, task forces should be put
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the sole purpose of preventing the kidnapping from taking
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.
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, they can use proven effective methods like setting up bait to lure the criminal before
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are hurt. If done on a large enough scale throughout the world, it could drastically reduce the number of abductions.
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but not least, rescues should take
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for
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who are currently being exploited so as to allow them a chance at
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real life. In summary, vulnerable youth
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loose
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allow the trafficking of
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to run rampant. Solving it would involve government intervention
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, law enforcement and
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endless rescue missions.

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