It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since ancient times, a significant number of animal species have become extinct.

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is natural,

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technological advancements,

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extinction

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process

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can be alleviated. It is deemed that through some technological

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process

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can be decelerated properly. I firmly believe that

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issue should be tackled once it has a detrimental impact on the natural environment.

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issue may cost too much, and addressing the problem can be

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unaffordable

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can be mitigated by

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government endorsement. Specifically, allocating a high amount of financial

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may cope with

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animal

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, enforcing comprehensive

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legislation

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to undermine the issue may be effective.

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, in some Asian countries, governments imposed new rules, which

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encompassed

all endangered species

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as panda. Disrupting their habitat will be fined and the dose of the deterioration people can be sentenced to imprisonment.

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, individuals should take measures to ensure endangered animals'

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. People should collaborate with well-established societies to raise public awareness through seminars and organisations.

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, there are several societies

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carrying out their projects in numerous points over the world. The most significant aim is shielding endangered

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animals'

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rights.

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, in the UK, a lot of facilities were established in

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of the cities to accelerate projects for animals and their habitat.

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, even though some people strongly believe that nobody cannot interfere natural

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of animal

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, I strongly believe that taking measures by

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and

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, plays a crucial role in alleviating

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impacts of

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