Today, more and more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

In the modern era, an increasing number of young generations decide to get married and to have children in their

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. In the meantime, there are abundant debates to argue whether

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is a positive or negative trend. Personally, I believe

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is negative thinking because it plays the main key in causing unhappy marriages and

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's health. The explanation will be presented thoroughly in the following paragraphs. We can not deny the obvious reason that late

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or having children in

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thirties

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is an attractive choice because of free time. As young people do not get married before thirty, they do not need to worry about family, inlaws or

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,

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, they have more time to enjoy their own life

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as travelling around the world, having a yolo (you only live once) lifestyle.

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,

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wonderful period of time does not exist forever,

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you are getting old and living alone, your friends who are married and have beautiful families to live with.

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, the negative impacts of

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late

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in the

thirties

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are

increasing

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rate

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of divorce and unhealthy pregnancies.

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dating in the

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continues

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the potential candidates, the pressure to get married from family becomes significant concerning,

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, the pupils chose to settle down rapidly without acknowledgement Because there is no mutual understanding in

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, the

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apply

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sharp contrasts appear, the more arguments leading to the collapse of a

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. Taking Viet Nam

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, the

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of separated couples swiftly

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in recent years, one of the most common reasons is getting married to please the family

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and then

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finding out they are not on the same page which leads to divorce.

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, women who are

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their

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will take more risks during

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the pregnancy

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period.

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older the females are, the more impaired

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apply

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the immune system is,

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, the pregnancy is affected.

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a local record, the

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of

disable

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babies

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were

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born by elder women grew substantially to more than 50 per cent within thousands of the number of newborns in a decade. The data

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that the high

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of opportunities of having unhealthy

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is extremely alarming. In conclusion,

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some individuals follow the late

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and having children after the

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trend, in my personal view, it is a negative trend because of bad influences.