The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.
The provided diagrams give information about the development of cutting
equipments
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equipment
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in 1.4
million
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years
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and 0.8
million
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years
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ago. A detailed analysis reveals that the
front
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view
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of the
tool
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, 1.4
million
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years
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ago, was more in
weidth
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width
weight
from the
bottam
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bottom
than the top.
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Side
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The side
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view
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of the same
tool
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was similar in height but was more thin than the
front
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shape.
Back
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The back
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view
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was almost
same
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the same
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in
weidth
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width
weight
likewise
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the
front
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shape. In contradiction, 0.8
million
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years
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ago
front
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side
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of the cutting
tool
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was bigger in size as compared to the the presented 1.4
million
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years
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ago
tool
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.
Similarly
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,
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side
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the side
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view
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was
also
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more thin
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thinner
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in size than the 1.4
million
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years
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ago
tool
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.
Furtermore
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Furthermore
,
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the back
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back
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backside
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side
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was
also
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similar in
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the weidth
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weidth
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width
weight
of
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front
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the front
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side
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.
Overll
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Overall
,
ccutting
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cutting
tools presented
in
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apply
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0.8
million
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years
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ago looked more
shap
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shape
and bigger in size as compared to the equipment indicated
in
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apply
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the
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apply
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1.4
million
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years
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ago.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, years, front, view, tool, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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